Changes to the story

Me and my partner Jack decided to make changes to the story. There are various reasons behind this.

What are the changes?
Well unlike the previous story that included more characters our new and updated story has only 3 characters. The reasons I've chose to do this is because I wanted the horror trailer to fill very claustrophobic. And it created a intresting juxtaposition between the beginning of the trailer which will have the a superimpose of " In a quite peaceful neighborhood" which would typically allude to thriving society with a lot of people, and in contrast by the trailer only having around 3 characters it shows that the creeper's victims are in fact very alone and deeply isolated.

Story
The new story for the trailer starts of with several establishing shots which are cut together which flickers of a girl who looks to have been murdered. She will be covered in blood, which will help to distress the viewer. Then the full scene of her murder is revealed around one quarter the way through the trailer. Victim number 1 tries to open the door but the door but the doors shut. She turns around but no one seems to be there. The lights turn on and off. Then we are finally reveal the creeper standing ominously, waiting. The creeper proceeds to brutally murder her.

As the trailer develops te creeper has chosen his next victim. He slowly begins to stalk her. As he slowly leads her into his trap. But the trailer abruptly ends. Making it hard to determing whether or not the she has been killed.

This story is much shorter than the original plan. However I feel that by shorting the story it will help it to be much more conventional. For instance the trailer will contain almost no dialogue, because we don't won't to reveal anything.